Monday, January 26, 2009
assignment
18 year old Thomas Schawanke was found at 7:40 A.M. this morning injured in the basement of a Southern Illinois University Edwardsville dormitory. Witnesses that had seen Schawanke earlier said he had been drinking. Police believe Schawanke fell anywhere from two to ten stories down a trash chute around 2:00 A.M. Schawanke is currently being treated at Anderson Hospital in Maryville . Hospital officials declined to talk about his condition. Mary Rouse, Dean of Students at the university said that the incident again raises concern about alcohol abuse on campus.
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Mason - keep in mind what is unusual about this story - he fell down a trash chute! That is the lead; get to it right away. Also, check your AP Stylebook for guidance on time (a.m., p.m., etc) Do not start a sentence with a number (like 18); instead, spell the number out.
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